Marine Parks Argumentative Essay

Argumentation Structure

by Cara Gratton

This site is designed to help students understand the structure of the argumentative essay, so they can write using this style more easily. It shows the purpose and organization of the argumentative essay. Sample readings with questions as well as a list of writing topics are included.

What is an argumentative essay?

Charles Darling's website "Guide to Grammar and Writing", explains what an argumentative essay is. It links to several other pages within the same site, so you can learn more about other aspects of writing such as citing authorities and using statistics.

When do you use this style of writing?

The Paradigm Online Writing Assistant website explains when the argumentative style of writing is used. It links to other pages within the same site to explain the different types of arguments that can be used, , reason, ethics, and emotion.

How is it organized?

The OWL Online Writing Lab website shows how an argumentative essay is organized. It outlines each paragraph of a standard five-paragraph essay. The WriteFix.com website also outlines how to write an argumentative essay. 

Sample Essays with Questions

Write an Essay

Go to the Glendale Community College English Department website and choose a topic from the list of topics on the right-hand-side of the page. Click on a topic that interests you and visit a site where you are given a thesis statement and references that you can use when you write your own essay. Write an argumentative essay, 300-400 words in length.

Updated August 22 2016 by Student & Academic Services

The issue of whether we should allow marine parks to stay open has been widely debated in our community recently. It is an important issue because it concerns fundamental moral and economic questions about the way we use our native wildlife. A variety of different arguments have been put forward about this issue. This essay will consider arguments for having marine parks and point to some of the problems with these views. It will then put forward reasons for the introduction of laws which prohibit these unnecessary and cruel institutions.

dolphin parks provide the only opportunity for much of the public to see marine mammals (Smith, 1992). Most Australians, , live in cities and never get to see these animals. marine parks allow the average Australian to appreciate our marine wildlife. Smith dolphins, whales and seals can be viewed in the wild at a number of places on the Australian coast. , there are more places where they can be seen in the wild than places where they can be seen in captivity. , most Australians would have to travel less to get to these locations than they would to get to the marine parks on the Gold Coast. , places where there are wild marine mammals do not charge an exorbitant entry fee - they are free.

Dr Alison Lane, the director of the Cairns Marine Science Institute, we need marine parks for scientific research (The Age, 19.2.93). She much of our knowledge of marine mammals comes from studies which were undertaken at marine parks. The knowledge which is obtained at marine parks, , can be useful for planning for the conservation of marine mammal species. Jones (1991) , park research is only useful for understanding captive animals and is not useful for learning about animals in the wild. Dolphin and whale biology changes in marine park conditions. Their diets are different, they have significantly lower life spans and they are more prone to disease. , marine mammals in dolphin parks are trained and this means that their patterns of social behaviour are changed. Therefore research undertaken at marine parks is generally not reliable.

the Marine Park Owners Association marine parks attract a lot of foreign tourists (The Sun-Herald 12.4.93). these tourists spend a lot of money, increasing our foreign exchange earnings and assisting our national balance of payments. foreign tourists would still come to Australia if the parks were closed down. , surveys of overseas tourists show that they come here for a variety of other reasons and not to visit places like Seaworld (The Age, Good Weekend 16.8.93). Tourists come here to see our native wildlife in its natural environment and not to see it in cages and cement pools. They can see animals in those condition in their own countries , we should be promoting our beautiful natural environment to tourists and not the ugly concrete marine park venues.

Dolphin parks are unnecessary and cruel. The dolphins and whales in these parks are kept in very small, cramped ponds, whereas in the wild they are used to roaming long distances across the seas. , the concrete walls of the pools interfere with the animals' sonar systems of communication. , keeping them in pools is a terrible restriction of the freedom of fellow creatures who may have very high levels of intelligence and a sophisticated language ability. , there are many documented cases of marine mammals helping humans who are in danger at sea or helping fisherman with their work.

, these parks should be closed, or at the very least, no new animals should be captured for marine parks in the future. Our society is no longer prepared to tolerate unnecessary cruelty to animals for science and entertainment. If we continue with our past crimes against these creatures we will be remembered as cruel and inhuman by the generations of the future.

Bibliography

The Age, 19.2.93
The Age Good Weekend, 16.8.93
Jones, G. (1991). The Myths about Animal Research in Marine Parks. InScientific Australian. Vol 12, No 3.
Smith, H. (1992). Marine Parks: Good for Business, Good for Australia. In Leisure Business Review. Vol 24, No. 4
The Sun-Herald, 12.4.93

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